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UPDATE
Woot lineart! I decided to keep it simple :)

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UPDATE
Okay, so here are some quick colours/markings I came up with, let me know what you think!

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This is a sketch I've drawn up for my website header
At the moment its just a generic canine hugging a giant wacom pen
I just want some feedback and crit about the pose/composition, and also thoughts abot how the character should look (colours, markings, accessories etc)
The theme for my website is green/yellow/orange, with a vintage pattern...

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:iconsanifa:
aww so sweet

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sweet avi made by ~zyphrr :heart:
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:iconphotografever:
thankyou! :)

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:iconmaria-mar:
Maybe you could use your fursona? She has those colors ^_^
I think it's a fun idea and cool composition, but maybe you should try again the head/neck?... The character is posing laid back, looking so comfortable and relaxed, but then the head position seems a bit rigid compared to the body.

Other than that, looking forward to see the results :D
:iconlilibandicoot:
very veery cute :3

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sorry for my english u_u
avatar by ericbandicoolf :D
:iconphotografever:
thanks for the feedback! I was thinking of using my fursona, but I wasnt 100% sure...
I definitely want the had to be inclined towards the pen, but you are right, it still looks a little bit too rigid...
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:iconphotografever:
thankyou very much! :aww:
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Put condoms on your ears... They'll stop you getting wet willies!
-Josie

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:iconlilibandicoot:
welcome :hug:

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sorry for my english u_u
avatar by ericbandicoolf :D
:iconmaria-mar:
Maybe the way she is inclined in your icon? She's kinda rotating her head to blink, maybe it would look cool :D
:iconphotografever:
hmmm nice idea! I'll see how it looks! :D

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